FMP Evaluation

The initial stages to creating my FMP I started with a great amount of primary research which continued throughout the project. Once I understood the concept of my FMP and that it would be set in feudal Japan and involve samurai and clothing of that period in time; during our trip to V&A I spent my time in the Japan section creating sketches and taking pictures for later reference. Throughout my project, I referred back to these reference pictures and other forms of primary research such as published manga from some of the most respected mangaka (manga artist) taking aspects that I like as well as using inspiration. Something I often did was refer to manga to see how different artists use panels to tell the story across the pages; through this study I discovered you can be rather creative with the panels particularly during action sequences or sections with drama; whereas a more traditional structured look of boxes can be useful whilst depicting a simple scene such as an exchange of dialogue between characters. Eiichiro Oda was a big inspiration in my work as I like how in his manga (One Piece) he exaggerates facial expressions to really convey emotions in characters. I even took the time to research via youtube videos how mangaka plan out their pages and closely studied their process to a fully finished page. 

I can confidently say that I managed to finish the FMP by the deadline; however, that is not to say that my time management was the best. In hindsight I would have started the production of the manga after two weeks of solid primary research, not only would this have given me more breathing room in terms of how close the project was completed towards the deadline but perhaps even would have prevented the modifications to my initial proposal of the FMP. Firstly pages took a lot longer than I initially thought they would have, this is most likely due to the fact that this was my first ever manga I fully produced despite it only being a chapter I now understand the full process and in have a newfound respect for all comic artists especially manga as everything is on them and it is a hefty task just getting a chapter out. Now I have the experience and know the process I could have created the 20 pages in half the time as the element of not knowing would be absent therefore making me a lot more confident as well as having an increase in proficiency. I believe that I would have benefitted from creating a well-detailed plan for the duration of the FMP, instead, I followed a loose guide I had created for myself.

The final project that was displayed in the exhibition is different from what I had initially proposed for my FMP. I intended to create a children’s book/ manga hybrid alongside a short animation. However as time went on and I began production I began to think rationally and contemplated what was really possible within the time I had on my hands, I came upon an ultimatum that I should create a manga to the best of my abilities as I believe it is not only something I’m passionate about but also a project where I can let my strengths shine, such as drawing and telling a story. With the manga I can still tell a compelling story with no real restrictions; that is also the reason why I decided to drop the part of it being a children’s book hybrid as that would naturally bring limitations. Whilst my ideas were very varied they were too scattered, I felt as though I would rather pick one aspect and created it to the best ability.

Once I had my mind set on creating a manga I was focused on making this to the quality of the market standard a manga that could be picked up by a publisher. Combing my research into manga and my imagination I invested into all the required materials and got to work. These materials included: Gpen nib this is a traditional Japanese way of inking a manga, manga B5 paper a very sturdy paper that can withstand the sharp nib without cutting and of course manga! I studied pre-existing manga a lot in order to achieve an authentic manga look. I roughly spent 2 weeks developing characters and a story, I believe this was enough time to fully flesh out the story and characters along with their motives and personalities. As I was doing the first chapter I focused on introducing main characters as well as establishing a problem where the chapter would conclude. As I had never used a Gpen nib before I experimented a lot on the first couple of days of the different line variation I could get and how to correctly hold the nib; it is a difficult learning curve however once I got into the flow of the process it actually quickly became my preferred way of inking. I combined the traditional methods with digital to help speed the process, once I had all of my pages inked to my satisfaction I scanned all pages in for digital modification, this included screentones, halftones and speech bubbles.

I decided to present my work as a traditional manga, of course, I used mixam a comic printing company I came in contact with last year whilst at comic con; for the authentic manga look, I made sure that the book was printed from right to left. The website was very efficient as it allowed me to select my preferred paper size and type, allowing me to create a genuine manga. The quality is that of the industry standard to the point that I feel so confident in this manga that I will be using this as part of my portfolio in showing my works to publishers and other members in the industry. I feel as though my intentions of creating a manga was completed to a professional standard and was definitely done well, along with the standard of artwork; I believe that all professional comics have consistent artwork which my manga shows. On the other hand the writing could have been written at a better standard, I believe that this is because I did not put much time into the development of a script, certainly not as much as the development of the illustrations; which is crucial as a comic depends on both illustrations and the literature. Looking at the finished product I can see the impact it has had on my work progressively, in all aspects including illustrations, comic making and workflow. This project has also given me a creative boost in confidence as an artist.

In conclusion, if I was to do this project again I would definitely spend the first 2 days just curating a well structured, achievable idea. meaning that right from the start I can get into my workflow working towards the final product without wasting valuable time which can be put to use in creating. Essentially I would have really emphasised the importance of time management as that would have allowed me to create more at greater efficiency. That being said I can say that this project has shown me that as a creator time is of the essence.

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Museum research trips

Throughout the past month or so I have been diligent in making sure that I do plenty of primary research towards developing my final major project to my best abilities. As part of that, I made sure to be well travelled in museums that have items and artefacts related to my FMP; in this case Japan and its rich history.

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As a class, we took a trip to the Victoria and Albert Musem, this was beneficial to me as they have a dedicated section to Japanese history. The samurai armour was fascinating and useful for reference to study to help develop my understanding of exactly how the materials come together and fit; the weaponry and the craftsmanship. I made sure to render some studies whilst there. I also took it upon myself to take pictures of the clothing as it is crucial I understand how the people dressed in order to successfully capture that specific period of time within my work.

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23/02/19 Leiden Museum

During my half term, I spent a few days in Holland staying with my Aunt. I wanted to enjoy my trip but also chip away at the steady research I had started for my FMP. Luckily my Aunt told me that within Leiden ( the location I was saying) there was a museum dedicated to Japanese items, art and culture perfect for me! This Museum is called Japan Museum SieboldHuis; it displays items that were collected by Philipp Franz von Siebold between 1823 and 1829 during his stay at Dejima, the Dutch trade colony nearby Nagasaki in Japan. This was my fondest research trip as I truly enjoyed what the museum had to display and the fact it was in a foreign country was truly special. I took a liking to the art within this small museum, the various prints have expressive poses and patterns; the traditional Japanese painting and inking style is distinctive and I can see how manga has directly developed from these techniques in several ways. I think that this museum was valuable in terms of research as the illustrations and pieces help to provide me with the tone of Japan in the Edo period; these images help me to build my own interpretation of this period in time. I believe that this is only possible through research of research that was carried out at the time, these studies are directly from Japanese artists living in Japan in the days of the samurai. In a way, this is some of the closest depictions of life and culture in those times aside from clothing, armour and weaponry that has survived the test of time. I say this as an artists eye is sharp in observing the key aspects of everyday life the average person overlooks.

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12/03/19 The British Museum

The last museum research trip was to the British Museum to explore their display of Japanese items from the Edo period. The items I found there were also fascinating and insightful to Japan’s extraordinary past. I took a liking to the samurai set they had on display as well as some of the traditional prints similar to what I had previously seen in Leiden.

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FMP – Visual influences and inspiration

As part of developing my FMP to the best quality artistically, I decided to look at influences I have come across in life that I believe would provide great motivation and inspiration to myself. Not to view them as a reference to copy but instead to observe and absorb the art and get a feeling for where the artist’s head was at whilst creating the works; taking techniques and compositions to put into my bank of creative development to carry out in different ways within my own works.

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These are some of the works of Hiroshi Hirata, he is best known in the west for his series satsuma gishiden. I specifically chose these images from that particular series as it expands upon the idea of gekiga which means dramatic images. I believe that this is an extremely important aspect in developing a shonen manga; the sense of movement and action needs to be conveyed in a dynamic way like no other. What I particularly like about  Harata’s work is the use of fast, yet accurate line work; just by looking at the art you can feel the speed of what is exactly going on. Additionally, the pages tend to be grand spectacles of art, they are not too restricted by the use of panels; I feel as though if this is used sparingly on moments of great drama it is the perfect depiction of gekiga.

I also used some primary research, for this I accumulated some of my manga books and have carefully studied the various compositions found throughout the books. What I noticed within my selection of manga was the exaggeration in expressions and characters; it is a great feature that I am keen on developing myself.

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Next, I did further primary research to help build a better understanding of the animation segment of my FMP which will have a colourful style reminiscent of that of children’s book illustrations. For this I selected a few of my sister’s books I was fond of; when selecting the examples for studies and inspiration I was keeping in mind the colour palette. I like how children’s books adopt different colouring techniques that show a different style of rendering. Some contain a textured finish and other a loose, watercolour feel to them. Whilst others mimic a painterly style that clearly shows brush strokes. What I have gathered from this research is that I can be free with a piece of art geared toward a younger audience… so long as the colours are done right! The colour cohesion needs to be present in order to keep the eyes of the younger audience attracted, keeping that in mind I should be fine.IMG_3854.JPG

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3D – Animation References

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I understand that great animation requires observation of movement and great timing. To help assist me with the movement for the 3D animation; I used a book appropriately titled: ‘The animator’s survival kit’. I used this specifically for getting the timing for the animation as all of the illustrations provide numbers for the frames along with how to move the character to exaggerate the movement and make it believable. It also helped me to understand how you can use the number of frames to your advantage to convey faster or slower movement. Even though this book was made for 2D animation the principles can still be applied as essentially it is still animation its just moving in three- dimensional space; in Maya I just made sure to animate form a 2D perspective to block in the keyframes and in-betweens, whilst occasionally using the perspective camera to see if my =character model was moving appropriately in the  3D environment.

I also used primary video reference for movement such as stepping up onto an object and simply walking; this reference was extremely useful as it is actual human movement it directly correlates to 3D animation.

3D Animation – Blocking sheet

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As part of my 3D animation, I created a rough blocking sheet I made this by simply going into the Maya file and using the camera to get the 2D perspective of the obstacle course. This was useful as it assisted me in rendering simple gestures of the exact position and movements at the relevant location throughout the obstacle course. I also added keywords to help me understand the camera position and other intricate movements such as a crawl, looking back I believe that adding timing would have proved to be beneficial in making the animation move fluidly.

Sheeba- Cutscene Script

P-Rai – Yay! I got the Chip Chup egg, Grandad will be so proud. It’s so shiny.

(P-Rai singing in the distance)

Elder Clan Member: Huh, what’s that astonishingly, bright glow; is that a little girl I hear in the distance? I told TOBIAS TO WATCH HIS POST!

(Elder Clan Member glares into the near distance to see P-Rai)

Elder Clan Member: Th… The… The Chip Chup egg! There’s no way, no one within 100 miles has a powerful enough Kemono to take on the Chip Chup bird. And a little girl of all people; oh this will be like stealing candy from a baby!

(Elder Clan Member rapidly approaches P-Rai and confronts her face on.)

P-Rai: Um..

Elder Clan Member: Gimme, gimme the egg.

(P-Rai shys away; holding the egg close to her)

P-Rai: Um… I’m not supposed to talk to strangers.

Elder Clan Member: Oh I don’t want you.

(Elder Clan Member chuckles, whilst slowly walking closer to P-Rai)

Elder Clan Member: May I please have the shiny egg. Not to keep! of course. I just want to touch it. Didn’t your parents teach you to share little girl?

(P-Rai adjusts to a defensive posture, extending her right hand out)

P-Rai: I don’t think you want to get any closer. Freak.

(Elder Clan Member swiftly moves in, breaking the barrier of personal space. He grabs P-Rai’s hand, gawking at the egg in her other hand.)

Elder Clan Member: Who do you think you’re talking to, show some respect to your elders!

(P-Rai frantically struggles)

P-Rai: Get off of me. Let go! It’s mine, not yours!

(In the wastelands the screams of P-Rai arguing with the Clan Member can be faintly heard)

P-Rai: Help! Sheeba where are you?!

(Sheeba springs up and raises her ear to the direction corresponding to the cries for help)

Sheeba:  *Cries* *Growl*

(Sheeba makes a gigantic leap toward the scene of the commotion.)

Sheeba: *Bark* *Bark*

 

 

 

Sheeba – Character Profiles

Name: P-Rai

Title: Miss

Age: 10

Ethnicity/Race: McBeethian

Complexion: Caramel

Height: 5′2

Weight: 28.1 kg

Eyes: Pink

Personality and demeanour: Curious, outgoing and sometimes naive.

Appearance: Short, cute and young.

Motto: ‘When you’re hungry eat!’

Bio: P-Rai is on her journey to becoming a warrior and must learn to strengthen the bond between her and her Kemono: Sheeba.

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Name: Sheeba

Age:7

Breed: Mutated Cane Corso

Colour: Black

Eyes: Orange

Personality and demeanour: Protective, caring and dominant.

Height: 40 foot

Weight: 9,800 kg

Bio: Sheeba is P-Rai’s very own Kemono, she is a  staggering 40 feet tall and is known to be P-Rai’s guardian angel.

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